Hey, I don't comment much on this stuff, but thought I would let you know I've been reading this, and I'm enjoying it. I like the "voice" you've chosen for the viewpoint character. It really works.
You're also doing a good job of explaining the world indirectly for those of us not familiar with the game except in passing.
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Date: 2012-09-26 03:50 pm (UTC)You're also doing a good job of explaining the world indirectly for those of us not familiar with the game except in passing.
Keep up the good work!